Fountain Of Fearless Fiancé Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Fountain Of Fearless Fiancé

Rating: 4.8


(dedicated to Ms. Nino Gvetadze, a talented pianist)

You trembled around midnight
Mocking crows just passed by
Velvet mountain ready to hug
A fearless one, a lost fiancee

Blind troubadours thread carefully
To Viaduc de Millau in early winter
A frozen zephyr grasps suddenly
A worried heart, tumultuous inside

In sigh a premonition reappears
Creates wonderful new horizons
Rustic songs fill in all hearts
Open all barriers, all suspicions

In the center of lush forest
All dark calm green
Two veiled angels provide
A fountain of eternal happiness

(inspired by Liszt’s Les jeux d'eau à la Villa d'Este)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 03 December 2008

I am afraid that this is too obscure for me to translate into something that speaks to me in a language I can understand. GW62

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Juan Carlos Abeti 04 December 2008

interesting point of view, a bit dark, but nice ending....good as always

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Joseph Poewhit 04 December 2008

Reminds me of something from TOLKINS works on the same tone

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Demon lover 19 December 2008

thats very beautiful

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C T Heart 16 December 2008

The flow of words were soft and beautifully penned out, great imagery used. a10/10

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Ben Gieske 15 December 2008

Interesting title and use of metaphors and good descriptive words and images.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 December 2008

Good sybolism, imagery

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 December 2008

written symbolically and poetically.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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