Found - Message Poem by H.i Chesebit

Found - Message

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My message in a bottle
the story of an aging angler
just an old battler

A new wind rising
unwelcome change
Shifting sands of
desolate shore

Setting with the ocean sun
tide tossed sea side greed
abandoned shells
driftwood
splitters
weeds

Seaside Memoriam
farewell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Gentry 23 February 2008

This speaks of utter desolation and abandonment. Your writing is good.

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