Forty Seven Years Poem by Thomas Vaughan Jones

Forty Seven Years

Rating: 5.0


We met in nineteen fifty five
and never noticed love arrive.
We little thought it would survive
for forty seven years.

We tasted joy and faced the pain
through summer sun and autumn rain
and listened to love’s sweet refrain
for forty seven years.

The clock has gone from Lover’s Way.
Its time is done, it’s had its day,
it gently ticked the time away
for forty seven years.

I well remember standing there
with perfect teeth and wavy hair.
I left them on the thoroughfare
of forty seven years.

But that was then and now is now.
Let’s stand up proud and take a bow.
Be glad we struggled on somehow
through forty seven years.

Our love will last eternally
for you mean all the world to me.
I thank you for the memory
of forty seven years.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It was actually fifty years one week and twenty two hours before she actually left me. But she loved this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 03 February 2014

Superb, and beautiful. The depth of the soul is in these words.

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Paul Reed 03 February 2014

A great tribute to the power of enduring love

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Joseph Anderson 01 February 2014

A solace for our souls.-Written with simplicity, brevity and great compassion. It is so great that she could see this. The repititive lines on each stanza ties it all together. A comforting keeper

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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2014

That's beautiful! What a tremendous pen! Bravo! Touche! To your pen, Sir! And to the both of you... I tip my hat and graciously bow.

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Valerie Dohren 31 January 2014

50 years is pretty good going - great poem too.

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