Fortune Poem by Vijay Sai R

Fortune

Rating: 3.9


Fortune
arrives in a boat
but
departs in a rocket!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2009

It can depart very quickly can't it.....but as long as our feet remain firmly on the ground.....life is wealth....love is a blessing....space...is the hollow..before we reach our final destination......where fortune is the air in which we breathe...nice work

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Afzal Shauq 02 July 2009

Fortune arrives in a boat but departs in a rocket! ver true and i agree with the idea you expressed in you small but a rich poem.. liked it much and let me say you write in inpressive way... thoghtful and good...10 +++++

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Howard Kern 04 July 2009

interesting, can be taken in many ways! where do you stand? the fortune side or the rocket side?

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Very nice expression,10

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Luz Hanaii 04 March 2011

Very wise. It almost sounds like the messages you get in a fortune cookie at a Chinese Restaurant.

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Except for the heirs of our Politicians?

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 October 2009

insightful lines! ! ! the fortune is wise: it arrives in a boat; we are waiting for it a long time but quickly quickly it departs in a rocket and leave us with another wait... in Computing we say an ENDLESS LOOP, that's fortune...

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Indira Renganathan 09 July 2009

The mischievous truth of fortune..in bullet-force-write...sure anybody will like this poem

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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