Fort Of Sand Poem by akram saqib

Fort Of Sand

Rating: 5.0


What will happen?
In this blind den
What is the end?
Of this new trend

When my future
I think about
I fall a prey
To dubious doubt
I feel this world
A brittle land

That is fort
Constructed with sand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 21 March 2009

Great write, meaningful.10

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Muhammad Ali 18 March 2009

Superb, simple theme and deep lines very nice 10

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 10 March 2009

Brief write but worth reading! Thanks for sharing!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 10 March 2009

Brief write but worth reading! Thanks for sharing!

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