Forsaken Tendencies Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Forsaken Tendencies

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Know one knew what I knew
just what it was
that covered you up until.
Tendrils like vines
vines very long hidden by fog
inbetween.
The mysterious search
as blue as the earth inside you.
Pillows for cloud's
blanket you, awash in the rain
wrapped around.
Night time stars glow at midnight
moving streams
running away with your dreams.
Through my fingers
like water I knew what it was
distant lands what I knew
here it was.

Friday, July 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Your obvious and ever present penchant for Metaphor and the Abstract continues to impress. my friend...'Tendrils like vines'....(Wish I had thought of that) ~FjR~

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James McLain

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