> Fornication..A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Poem by Eyan Desir

well written one more deadly sin 10

sweet sin: } sweet poem: } good job,10+: }

Been there, done that! Cheers, Jerry

Your poem is great..... keep writing thisi's really nice

fanastic job and sweet one 10+

Truth & Just Truth alone. Great way of expression

Wonderful, vibrant work!

A very creative theme.. Nice flow of words.. You said it, what you had.. Way to go..

wow! a sweet surrender tail with pain.....making the best to be true and lead a power to convey the dunes of strength into the horizon of faith.....that makes every person strong....facing the trail of life...there is the hope and the wisdom to face of what the world gives.... at least you share your pain and the courage to let pain and victory surrender to what your faith believes.....and let the face of your wonder seduce the temptation pause... a very powerful poem...that gives the reader to go beyond of what is the past...thank you for sharing your thought....God bless....a 10 +++++

nice write on a creative theme. you have a very vivid and imaginative way of writing. the trick of the seductress or the sucubus is to lure you in first with the sweetest of smiles and then trap you with the temptations of the even better things to come that conceals their true purpose. very well written, my friend.10+ Jen