Forgotten Peace Poem by Min Sia
Forgotten Peace
Peace! Ah..my craziest aim.
When will this honor be claimed?
It look so easy as my ABC
Wish I was on my nursery
Drummers hum on all roads tonight
Drinking blood right after their flight
Starting with the beat of 1-2-3
Walking on sands of crab mentality
As I hop on stones of my river
Frogs laughing holding a flipper
Yet the moon shines so bright
But blinks on my every cry
I was now in middle of this endless search
Where hoping is absurd
May all of these absorb by heat
Before the dawn starts to freeze
It was a lovely Friday night
Where I find this journey through the blissful light
Wish there's someone on my side
Somebody to walk on all might.
Very nice piece. especially the last two stanzas were very good. well written with all necesssary words and tone.
It was a lovely Friday night Where I find this journey through the blissful light Wish there's someone on my side Somebody to walk on all might. a lovely friday night and somebody beside to get that bliss if not then oh wat a miss nice poem anjali +10
that's a great wish...you are not alone on your walk searching, Min...HE is with you; with every good hearted being since that Friday night...beautiful poem...talking its heart out...10
A worthwhile wish. I share your frustration about achieving peace. It does not just happen but requires a lot of continuous effort on the part of many other people. Your choice of images is fresh and enlightening.
Yeah, you'll find one someday.. This is a good poem too.. Great job..
Hmmm... beautifulll...! ! ! Always in beautiful word... The forgotten peace... but now someone already in you side right? Christmas almost come, prepare to date with someone that you loved, Min Sia, Hahahahaahaa...! ! ! Your beloved friend, Naru Kaede,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 8:45:46 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Elusive search of peace in life's tortuous journey moving amidst shifting sceneries Where is my eternal companion where is my peace where is my bliss. Good Work........