Forgive Us God Poem by DICKSON MSETI

Forgive Us God

Rating: 5.0


God is great,
When we achieve,
God is great,
When we succeed,
God is great,
When we’re accepted,
But oh!
We blame him,
When we loose,
When we fail,
It was our mistake,
We failed to behave,
We planned not plans.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Simple 29 May 2010

i understand where you are coming from. i was once like that so for you to write a poem people can relate to it good. i really enjoy this poem. the thing is GOD can only lead you in the right path, but its your choice weather you want to follow the path or go you only ways.

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Ivor Hogg 03 May 2010

we must learn to accept responsibility for our own actions.God gave us free will to choose.

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Kolawole Ajao 23 April 2010

The true picture of man's demeanour towards God painted. May He just forgive us. Nice.

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Abnish Singh Chauahan 23 April 2010

This is the common human tendency. Your poetic talent captured the reality. Congrats.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 16 April 2010

i rated this 10... nice message...

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