Forgive Me Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Forgive Me

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Forgive me for all my past sins
It was pursued with no aim of any win
It was just a young man’s venture
Without knowing its implications or future

I had proved weak to all the challenges
Failed to materialize support or ably managed
It was colorful life with appetite for all fancy thoughts
Life really seemed unique battle but never fought

I was becoming desperate when at beautiful garden
How many birds were visiting at odd time even?
The flowers were giving long magical spell
There were no enough words to dwell or tell

How can one resist the temptation?
To find all good company in relation
There was nothing to hide as it existed
All joy and fervor wished and insisted

Many lovely birds may move in desired direction
Make strong appeal for union with their action
I too had craze for surrendering to the nature
Everything was available and asking for sure

Forgive me for being bold and little rude
But nothing seemed to me wrong with its prelude
I found myself beautiful figure in mirror despite being nude
I failed to understand why other ideas did not intrude?

It was tender age to mingle with young companions
Form a group and make frequent smooth associations
Life was full of ventures to write with on golden page
Inscribe with own hand what can be best in such young age?

I would love to ask for forgiveness
But it had brought certainly the shine on face
There was clear mad rush and simple drive
Whether one had open mind to accept and believe

After years of long spell I sincerely apologize
Not for all nice acts that led to antagonize
But show of disrespect to elders for not submitting
Landing no ears to their advices or admitting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret Beil 08 January 2012

Respect! ! ! Good poem happy sunday to you also :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2012

Gloria Rodikis Yes the forgiveness we ask later in our heart, but at the time of the wrong we feel justified... I wonder if our conscience is asleep... then can man be blamed for his unconscious faults? 2 hours ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 January 2012

Forgive me for all my past sins It was pursued with no aim of any win

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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