Forgive Me Poem by Paul Storm

Forgive Me

Rating: 5.0


I lost that poem
Forgive me

About the roses
I stole from behind
The church

How
You ran your fingers
Through my hair

When we shared
A first kiss
And how everything was
Simple then

I lost those words
(i searched everywhere)

Mere words I guess
Typed hurriedly
On paper
To impress you

Anyway
The heart speaks
Better than
Its translations

Forgive me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 08 February 2008

this is very good you can almost taste the emotion thank you

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Meggie Gultiano 13 February 2008

wow, i love this, Nomi..simple but terrific!

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Riquetta Elliott 21 February 2008

This so forgiving Nomi nice work.

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K. V. Venkataramana 03 March 2008

'Forgive Me' impressed me greatly. Regards, Venkataramana

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Gone with the wind 08 August 2008

wow that was superb..really travels a great deal in the heart...a 10 :) Love Gul

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Kyle Shield Laster 16 July 2008

you surely know your words. each one means something. amazing.

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 April 2008

very natural, , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 March 2008

a simple writes..but full of enrichments.........

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M M 11 March 2008

This poem is very nice. Indeed. Regards,

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