Forgetiveness Poem by ramesh rai

Forgetiveness

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Forgetivness has become the part of my life
conceals all despair and delusion of life
makes me to remember the days and incidence
of my evil days, makes me to forget
all bad days of my life, inspires me
to enter into a new beginning of my life

Forgetiveness had not been the part of my life
I would have been carrying unnecessary burden
on my heart and mind, but due to forgetiveness
I am able to think some new in my life

Forgetivenss has increased span of my life
forgetiveness is the ointment
to heal up my all wounds of heart

If forgetiveness would not have been
I had been rowing same distance of my life

Forgetiveness is sincerely a great remedy
for all distress and painful situation of life
brings pleasure in life.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In my opinion it is good to forget. and my poem is on this subject. any suggestion in respect of any grammar etc. would be hightly appreciated.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 15 October 2012

In Forgetiveness i think you have coined your own term according to your theme...i am sure you don't have any Grammar issue...yes if you don't wish to carry on with this coinage, you can turn to forgetting or forgiveness...surely forgiveness is a great remedy...

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Unwritten Soul 15 October 2012

Closing last chapter and return to make a new lesson in your diary sound so precious in entire of your life, it's a peak of your lifetime, a climax of a beautiful things in many days as that's contain a precious thing for everyone to learn, to find and to gain..through dark we make an effort to see, not to blind, it was a nice write Ramesh! _Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 October 2012

we need more energy and confidence to forgive people, but inside us, the hurt is always there to be alert always!

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