You have breathed new life into my soul,
where you shall swim forevermore,
into oceans of deep green fire,
I am slave to your desires,
lay me down, watch me grow,
plant these seeds of love we sow,
into Heavens garden we shall fall,
where we bloom, flourish forevermore.
20/7/08
Viola...Only you could convey such heart-felt beauty into eight magical lines. Kev.
It sounds like there's a muse in your life, or perhaps you created one from imagination as I have done...lovely...Coach
I've undone my existence and offer you the play dough of my body and soul; give it the shape of your dreams and desires
well done, though I am unsure of absolutes, you make them sound desirable, lovely metaphors
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Wonderfully romantic place to be Viola! I wish you great happiness. A stunning write, smiling at your good fortune, Tai