Forever True Poem by James Elston

Forever True



When I looked into your eyes
And said those words 'I do'
I saw the passion in your eyes
That said forever you'd be true

After we had kissed each other and
Danced our first slow dance
Everyone could see that
We were full of true romance

Some say nothing last forever
I don't find this to be true
Because if nothing last forever
Then what happens to me and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
jennifer hall 27 February 2007

Delicant poem...very good

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Steve Hagget 09 September 2006

Excellent poem and I share the sentiments. Well done, a well thought through and well pulled together piece, Steve

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James Elston

James Elston

Providence, Rhode Island
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