Christopher Holmberg

Rookie (07/23/1989 / Abbotsford BC)

For You. - Poem by Christopher Holmberg

For you.

With an eye for genuine wisdom,
I clutched your hand and lured you in.
Across an enchanted forest with impassable fog,
I made out your face and it was honest beauty.

You hymned my name through the soft coiled mist,
I replied with what I thought a memorable kiss.
Covered with impeccable virtue and confident style,
I rose to my feet and stared for a time.

With shivers and shocks from your mesmerising debris,
I fell into a dream where I strolled on the sea.
But still I searched for your dear vacant soul,
To uncover and save it was my only ambition.

You laughed and cried and never whispered goodbye,
It was a staggering day though full of passionate sighs.
Yet still in my mind I pondered the heavenly,
Your elegant figure succumbed to my imaginable finger.

I noticed you in a dream last night bordering confession,
Our eyes sealed with an everlasting obsession.
I had you then but now I cease to ask for reality,
Was it I you adored, or the company we implored?

Copyright © ®2009, Chris Holmberg. All rights reserved

Comments about For You. by Christopher Holmberg

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (6/30/2015 6:58:00 PM)

    Our eyes sealed with an everlasting obsession.Beautiful
    Superb (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 46,883 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/30/2015 6:34:00 AM)

    The soft coiled mist. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/30/2015 5:22:00 AM)

    the illusions of love and life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (10/11/2009 1:34:00 AM)

    I consider this a well written love letter addressed to a lovely damsel, a love letter that is not written in standard form but in poetry form. I should say in prose and that makes it more romantic. Well done, mate.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (10/10/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    Beautiful narration. nicely composed. great thought.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (10/9/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    A nice love letter for her in poetry form well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prakash Mehra (10/9/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    Its a nice composition. ofcourse 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Sivashanmugam Shanmugam (10/9/2009 1:11:00 PM)

    This wud b embodied n fashioned. It is reflecting Khalilgibran's poem.nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (10/9/2009 12:45:00 PM)

    it's a different mindscape that's projected here...enjoyed reading, young man! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,816 Points Ramesh T A (10/9/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    Haunting story of dream in a mist is well expressed to muse over in loneliness! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,314 Points Ken E Hall (10/9/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    An excellent encounter with dreams in reality with love inspired
    thanks for the invite+++++10
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jester's P (10/9/2009 3:10:00 AM)

    “For you”…it is a message of different meaning according to who will read it. However I am sure that the author has his own message- the message that is really the reason why he wrote it.
    Indeed, allow me to say that your poem is fitting to different angles of life’s reality. It could be love for man and woman, or a feeling/desire of deep devotion to someone; while it could be the love of God to his creation…
    It is deep and meaningful…nice one.

    and for you dear poet...all the best. thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/9/2009 3:09:00 AM)

    'You laughed and cried and never whispered goodbye,
    It was a staggering day though full of passionate sighs'...

    these lines are very much poetic...most i liked in this write...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kumud enjoying his life... (10/9/2009 3:06:00 AM)

    a very nice poem with full of feelings.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gold Fish (10/9/2009 2:59:00 AM)

    This poem is extremely well-written. It seems to be either a chance encounter or a figment of your imagination- this woman. You could post it on Craigslist in the Missed Connections section - put a link to your poems. I don't mean that to reflect negatively on your poem it just seems fitting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie jimmy zepp (10/9/2009 2:57:00 AM)

    Well, my dear poet friend...A true and sincere explanation, that defines love from your point of view...I agree with what you'd written...beautifully penned...bravo
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vijay Menon (10/9/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    its a masterpiece i can say a fine poem from such a young poet 10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 9, 2009

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