For Someone Really Very Special Poem by Akash Agrawal

For Someone Really Very Special

Rating: 5.0


When I saw you for the first time,
Felt you the only girl who can make my life shine.

Everything about you makes me crazy,
The truthfulness in you is your jewellery.
Everything about you, baby,
Is as natural as a fairy.

Your eyes full of innocence,
Awakens all my sense.
Whenever your eyes, looking for me, dance
I hide myself to see your intolerence.

In your long black dense hair,
To get lost in it, I dare.
Whenever I see your hair drenched
The thirst of seeing you is quenched.

Your pink moist lips,
Seems they have undergone under water many dips,
Which are something much more than the mere word beautiful,
Which are something much more than the mere word lustful.

I want to feel the warmth of your breath,
I want just you to be my fate.
I want to feel the touch of your hair,
I want to hold you with care.

For you, tonight may be black and white, (**The night b'coz of stars, moon and darkness comprises two colours: -Black and White)
But I promise I can colourise this night and make it bright.
The three magical words,
Many a time you might have heard.

Here with this rhyme,
I do a crime.
To propose
Hope you wont refuse.

I'll never let you cry,
And never say Good Bye.
Accept or reject whatever you do
I just want to say ' I LOVE YOU '.


NOTE: - The sentences followed by ** asterisk marks are not the part of the poem. They are just wriiten to explain the deep meaning of the lines.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 28 September 2009

hi, a very nice poem on love, life.very touching too. voted10 surya

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Aparna Sinha 25 September 2009

.....The three magical words, Many a time you might have heard. Here with this rhyme, I do a crime. To propose Hope you wont refuse. I'll never let you cry, And never say Good Bye. Accept or reject whatever you do I just want to say ' I LOVE YOU - - No one can turn down the offer so beautiful! ! ! ..very well done!

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Christina Phan 25 September 2009

awwww, i really luv this one this sweet and lovely 10+++++++ fanastic job

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Priyanka Agrawalla 06 June 2009

You rock man! ! ! Now tht shows tht guts 'Accept or reject whatever you do I just want to say ' I LOVE YOU '. ' If this poem is real, then i wish tht u may succeed. If u wrote out of imagination, then i should say that u have mastered! ! my best wishes with you.

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