For Real Poem by Dónall Dempsey

For Real

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Unknowingly, I approach you
not knowing what you are doing

gazing intently
at your hands

completely
lost in thought

I stopped
not wanting to disturb you

my photograph
lay like a leaf on your palms

held like cupped water
as if it could spill

you raise it to your lips
and as if taking a sip

kissed it

closed your eyes

and smiled

kissed it again

put it quickly away
flustered by my footstep

turned delightedly
and kissed me

on the lips

again and again

for real.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frankie Stones 24 August 2007

It's beautiful I love it. So much said in so few words. You are really good at writing and I can really relate to this poem. Yours always Frankie x

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Scarlett Treat 02 August 2007

As Gina said, a truly tender love poem....for real! Such depth of yearning and love!

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rachael richmond 26 July 2007

a superb piece of writing, donall...... subtle, beautiful and heart-warming....rachael

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Gina Pisapia 24 July 2007

This is really such a lovely gentle poem...so well observed. For real! ginaXXX

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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