For Noel Poem by rosalinda flores martinez

For Noel

Rating: 5.0


Miles of travel sweeping us
To a journey yonder the market.

Screams of whining people
Beside our bus reach for you

You hold them one by one
Tuck them in the comfort of leather seats
As sentinel to souls,

Our backpacks wait in the tower
The bus races though the hills

If it's our end
Did we die?

You stand in faith
With me
Carrying your other shoe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 13 September 2009

Is this piece especially for me or is it for all Noels in the world? I like this a lot, please don't stop writing. Take care...

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Afzal Shauq 25 May 2009

it's a rich and well written poem...interesting and good idea is there..means you can write perfectly..so try to add more poems too... like these two last stanzas of your poem.. ++ 10 If it's our end Did we die? You stand in faith With me Carrying your other shoe

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2009

hi roslinda a bit inclined and daunting for me but if i got you right...its awesome and very nice your bio says freelance what do u write cheers

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Nice writing

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