Aditi Khandelwal

Rookie - 1 Points (December 27 1997)

For My Mom


When God finished his experiments
He decided to make someone perfect
Someone kind, loving, giving and sweet.
He then compared you with flowers,
You were softer.
He compared you with ocean,
Your heart was deeper.
He compared you with the sky,
You had more beauty.
He compared you with a tree,
You stood more confident.
He compared you with the cupid,
You were more loving.
He called an angel and sent you on Earth,
That day comes again today
So I wish you a very happy birthday!

Submitted: Monday, January 23, 2012
Edited: Saturday, April 21, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

As the title suggests, i wrote this poem for my mom on her birthday...
This was just a small gift to her from me for all her love and care...
Thank you :)

Comments about this poem (For My Mom by Aditi Khandelwal )

  • Gold Star - 10,908 Points Soulful Heart (2/6/2012 3:14:00 AM)

    mom the universal strength, life source, back bone, inspiration, and the only absolutely reliable............thanx for putting my feelings to words.I cud really connect (Report) Reply

  • Rookie VEER the ultimate boy (2/2/2012 11:09:00 AM)

    nothing to say abt this poem...and yes abt mom....that word is means a lot without any particular definition.......
    its a great poem.....thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (2/1/2012 9:41:00 PM)

    What a lovely poem! absolutely beautiful, very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (1/31/2012 1:19:00 PM)

    It is beautiful. You are the best daughter in the world. Your Mother is a wonderful person and you see it, which is the best.
    I love you too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deep Mukherjee (1/30/2012 11:24:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing such a sweet poem! ! ! ! it's absolute truth! ! ! (Report) Reply

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