(for Dónall) The Artist And Her Model Poem by Janice Windle

(for Dónall) The Artist And Her Model

Rating: 5.0


Soft charcoal touching
where words cannot say how strong
his smooth shoulder feels.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 11 August 2008

The artist is not indifferent to the model, so that the haiku charged, lot of passion in a small box. Well penned!

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Donall Dempsey 10 August 2008

I love how you create me...call me into being...with the gentlest of touches...whether it be charcoal or caresse...kiss or smile. You are gra agus gaire...gra agus gaire all the while...love and laughter...love and laughter. How very beautiful you are! Mo ghra thu! Ti amo tesoro mia! love Donall Donall

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Beautifully composed J. I can imagine the scene as you compose the portrait.... with love in both your eyes, to be sure. t x

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