(for Dónall) Meeting Poem by Janice Windle

(for Dónall) Meeting

Rating: 2.8


Meeting, we touched
touching, clung to each other
never to let go.

A coup de foudre? Oh yes
on a cloudless summer day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 01 November 2009

love is a many splendid thing......do you know the old movie....you little poem reminded me when the lovers meet on a hill top in the springtime....... Beautiful poem. Ruthie: o)

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

never to let go. Rachel Ann Butler

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Onelia Avelar 17 September 2009

The time frame is so wide - 'never' - meaning 'forever' here and the simple phrases like 'A coup de foudre? Oh yes on a cloudless summer day.' make the ethernity seem so full of life - i have always imagined it a bit boring ;) but here you make it seem lovely in some British manner - cup of tea or something and everything goes well. Sweet little piece.

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