For All The Wrong Reasons Poem by ruzolina seess

For All The Wrong Reasons

Rating: 5.0


For all those warm days
purified with stillness
only yet some small details
leave a trace.

Should I hold on that?

For all the right moves
on the chess-board of the world
one step back to be expatriate
and left defeated.

Should I overcome surrender?

For all the credence that was
there
tinsel turnes into the black
now we pass the time of day
for all the wrong reasons.

Should I've let you go away?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 31 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ruzolina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 06 November 2011

My friend Romeo has well stated -Learning from our mistakes is a strong sign of Wisdom and Maturity! This is not only applicable for a person only but for the country and society also. we have to learn a lot from history and our past. Great imagination to be conceived.

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Romeo Della Valle 25 October 2011

By giving up, you lose all your chances of winning! Like I said in my poem titled: In Pursuit of Happiness, 'What I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the skies! We are like flowers: everyday is a beautiful day presenting us a chance to grow graciously! Learning from our mistakes is a strong sign of Wisdom and Maturity! This well penned and poignant write clearly shows your poetic talent and it has become your stepping stone to freely enter the Poetry World! 10+++Welcome! I look forward to read more of your talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Vipins Puthooran 25 October 2011

Sometimes the wrong moves of our life will make halt in our path of life and thrust us to surrender in its flow.. A good poem

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