Footsteps Poem by Suki Nakamura

Footsteps

Rating: 5.0


footsteps on the pavement
nearing the door of the house beside a hill
though still far

i always know
it's you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 20 October 2009

this is haunting....and quite intriguing...cuz you don't know if that sound is welcome or not....

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John Mcmanus 20 October 2009

I like this Suki even though, you have only a few words you get a sense of the connection you have with whoever the poem is about. top marks!

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