Fog* Poem by elysabeth faslund

Fog*

Rating: 5.0


Too misty, too white.
Fog changes pelicans
Into prows of ships.
Slow, too slow to
Ignite red lights,
Switch gates down.
Listening, windows up...
No engines, no
Crackling radio.

Easy seagulls perch
Ramshackle wharves,
Eyeing pelicans
Moving pterodactyl-like
In time, in space
Over smooth water
Not jumped by mullet
Or Reds.

White receding, revealing
No outriggers on far
Horizon bend to
Boudreaux Canal.
A red and white cork
Zig-zags, t.v. blasts
A decongestant ad.
Fog chimneys into the
Air.
The mirror clears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 06 July 2007

Fog is pure magic, a poem in itself. Lovely work, elysabeth. As always, Sandra

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Scarlett Treat 23 May 2007

To anyone who has ever, ever been in a wharf in the fog...this is HOME. I can hear the sounds, feel the air, smell the smells....HOME.

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Derrick Clark 23 May 2007

i like these short poem, keep it up.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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