Flying Dream Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Flying Dream

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Oh come on and watch in sky is flying dream,
Entire Ocean with salty water is filled in cream.
Everywhere flowing the stream of milk in nature,
Time has come to wait for a while us to nurture.

Dream we see real or unreal in the path of far,
Mind dwells under the flow of thoughts like star.
No boundary we see before or after in bush,
The shadow attracts in screen and does push.

Sleep and dream, fest and rest remain in a race,
While we wash feel fresh charm dwells in face.
Morning brings lots of colours in East direction,
Dreamful day starts with billions pieces of motion.

How far life goes nobody knows during deep sleep,
Unseen thread of time ties us for which we do creep.
While dream falls on the lap of truth blossoms more,
To watch this real drama stars fall on the sea shore.

Nature has made dream for us to dream God ever,
Wings are attached in mind to fly in dream in clever.
Never should we forget father even for a moment,
Miraculous his creation is who can give the comment?

Monday, September 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All of you come on and watch, in sky dream is flying. Entire Ocean generally is filled with salty water but now it is filled with cream. It is just like that everywhere in nature flowing milk. Truly time does not wait for anybody. But due to flying of dream, to nurture us time has come to wait for a while. Whether it is unreal or real, while we see dream of far path due to the unlimited flow of thoughts mind dwells like a star. In such case in a bush before or after us we do not see any boundary. In screen of dream the shadow attracts and pulls and pushes us. Whether this is sleep or dream or fest or rest, everything lies in a race. While we wash face at that time we feel charm that dwells on. In East direction while morning comes at that time it brings colours. With billions of pieces of motion, actually a dreamful day starts. Actually during deep sleep how far life goes this nobody knows at all. We creep due to the tie of unseen thread of time. While dream falls in the lap of truth, it blossoms more like flower. On sea shore stars fall to watch this drama of reality. It means during dream many impossible things happen as real and possible. Actually nature has made dream for us to see and dream ever about God only. Being clever to fly in dream wings are attached to mind. Even for a moment we should not forget our father. His creation is really miraculous. Who can give comment to his creation? This poem is based on such theme and written on a special occasion in India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 23 September 2014

Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem! We donot know what awaits us in future.... Man has limits! But God is omniscient, omnipotent and omnipresent! Relying on His power is the only thing we can do to keep ourselves in peace!

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Bernard Snyder 20 September 2014

How far life goes nobody knows.....that is so very true. Where do we go when we're asleep. As I recall, I've found myself in many odd places during these times. I find this poem nice and interesting!

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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

The dream state is not fully understood. It is mysterious as we live in a different reality.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 August 2016

Dream! ! In the path afar. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2014

Sleeps and dreams are still a mystery, man could not understand man yet.

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Heather Wilkins 05 October 2014

time does not wait for anybody a good write

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Alesia Leach 05 October 2014

A thought provoking poem and excellent rhyming.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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