Flush Them All Away Poem by Obed dela Cruz

Sometime all we need and look for is a temporary relief.

very nicely composed.....amazing to go through....keep up the good work... God bless! ! ! ! ! ! ! .........

Every young teen aged person has undergone this kind of experience in his or her life. Me too when I was in teens.

At 15 harmones and growth take place. They are trying years, but in memory golden.

A very serious message laced with clever humor. I needed that. Keep it up, big guy.

Such a meaningful poem, laced with poetic humor and that is what makes it so interesting to read

I will never be left alone with pain. I will never be alone in this place. In the times I feel that there’s something wrong I’ll go to be stronger and to stay strong. All those bad things, I’ve flushed them all away. So lovely and strong poem making me feel really could flush everything away...

I agree with Ronald, You have certainly improved in the area of language and I feel that as you continue to write you will master what you want to say. This is a very well structured poem and I hope to see many more come from your pen. Good write. Your Friend Lynn

such a meaningful poem...telling me that i need not be distracted by the non-sense in the world. loved it 10++

lovely to read! everyone needs to better himself everyday! ! ! ThanksForSharing/