Flowing Falls Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Flowing Falls Haiku

Rating: 5.0


The rolling river

journeys through forest chasm

joins at the crossroads



This is my entry for the poetry.com daily haiku contest.Some of my past written haiku were also entered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Billy Joe Collins, Haiku are very short poems that pack a wallop in meaning.Try writing a three line 5-7-5 syllable poem based on a picture-it's a real challenge to stay in the rule guidlines.

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Billy Joe Collins 25 November 2008

nicely said but a little short but dose read well

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