Vartika Pandey

Rookie - 0 Points (2/7/1997)

Flowers With Thorns - Poem by Vartika Pandey

In that niche
So dark and deep
I found that delicacy

As red as blood
Just bloomed from a bud
Surrounded
By serene shine
She was stuck with mud
At a side, as I tried
To blow all impurity aside.

Until she shone bright
In the happy summer’s light.

How could she have been there?
How could one be so callous?

I grieved at her fate
I smiled at her innocence
Gazed at her lovely petals
Curling in the breeze of spring
Something curled inside me too.

I begin admiring her beauty
With my skin rolling on her body.

A spell broke
I stopped
When I saw the red drops
As my skin cried
It knew the beauty had to abide
The law of the divine...

I felt the sorrow arise
When one of the arrows in her armor
Chuckled loudly
The red crown it borrowed from my skin
Shone like a ruby.

Her petals bent a little down
When she saw her master frown

I couldn’t bear the scorn
So I smashed that thing on the ground
In that niche
So dark and deep…


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem will always be closest to me not only as my first composition, but also because it applies to my life in all stages..

Comments about Flowers With Thorns by Vartika Pandey

  • Rookie - 92 Points Anish Chouhan (2/9/2014 6:02:00 AM)

    Her petals bent a little down... When she saw her master frown.. good personification.. keep writing.. good one. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Shraddha The Poetess (1/29/2014 8:13:00 AM)

    a very beautiful creation.................
    i also invite u to read mine.....
    thnx.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 29, 2014


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