Jawad Al Harake

Rookie - 7 Points (30/3/1998 / Lebanon)

Flood Of Blood - Poem by Jawad Al Harake

From hundreds of centuries ago
There was an island that was far to know
It was called Atlantis, or so the legend's told
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Topic(s) of this poem: hate

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem to show people that breaking the main law of life which is love, respect and care will lead them to unexpected deadly end. Unfortunately, what is happening today is exactly the same image I've drawn in my poem. But, I hope that people will realize soon that the fish they are fighting for doesn't deserve all that wars and hatred.

Comments about Flood Of Blood by Jawad Al Harake

  • Gold Star - 11,015 Points Soulful Heart (7/17/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    U have pictured d world of today accurately......its already facing d curse of greed. Well written..ramadan mubarak (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Imelda Ortega Suzara (7/17/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    I like it too as an imaginary explanation of Atlantis. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,414 Points Leslie Philibert (7/17/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    nice retelling of an ancient myth, good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Titi Dale (2/23/2013 2:39:00 PM)

    Hi Javad,
    You have written some amazing imagery here :) it is clear in my mind. I have just publish a poem you may like: Heartfelt Words. Do take time to read if time permits :)
    Btw, this is amazing! ! KEEP IT UP! ! !

    Titi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 452 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/9/2012 3:59:00 AM)

    This poem is a stung in its case. The title just shows how shark and deeply this art is! Well done dear Javad. So nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Hamid Negah (8/3/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    Not only nice but has deep meaning, i love to follow your all poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eiz Qarqash (7/18/2012 6:12:00 AM)

    i love it.... it's a poem that provokes ur imagination (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Scully (7/17/2012 4:45:00 PM)

    A really well crafted poem with great imagination and style. Some very memorable lines. I really liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Linda May Fox (7/17/2012 4:11:00 PM)

    I like this poem and what it shows. It is also well written with good rhyme scheme! Great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Hezekiah Toheeb Tiamiyu (7/17/2012 4:04:00 PM)

    Fantastic story poem, .... Great work, nice rhythm.... Thumps up ~TT~ (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,437 Points Sallam Yassin (7/17/2012 2:06:00 PM)

    our deeds is our fate and the way u r tellin that is a great, well done. (Report) Reply

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