# Floating Thoughts! Poem by Seema Aarella

# Floating Thoughts!

Rating: 5.0


When in my memory
You radiate
In Passionate lyrical
Incandescence,
I rise and fall like sea.
Culminated by
Your lissome thoughts
Of magnetic intensity
I am flanked
Between agony and ecstasy.

Your amorous memories
Cherish my inherent
Oriental desires,
Flaunts an onyx
Like the onset of colorful season
You adorn
My bare intuitions,
Validate my madness
Venerate my rhymes
Give my nascent dreams a reason

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

wow...validate my madness...superb

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C T Heart 10 October 2008

such a nice poem, a powerful day dreaming, so powerful that emotions have taken over the mind...a 10

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Rakhi Jayashankar 10 October 2008

ur title itself holds the complete content of the poem 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 October 2008

Lovely seema! fine words chosen! really ecstatic! .........10+

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 October 2008

Hi Seema. Your poem floats like a feather.I enjoyed it!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 October 2008

10 for this lovely poem on love.

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Anjali Sinha 12 October 2008

raw and passionate expressions of love in beautiful poetry++++10 regards anjali

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 October 2008

People will grow younger by reading your poem. touching

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Aijaz Asif 11 October 2008

a very beautiful smooth poem indeed....thanks for sharing 10++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 October 2008

A frank and naked expression of love, agony and all those memories. Very powerfully said....................10

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