! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *flings Of Sorrow *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *flings Of Sorrow *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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yet I do remember the hoary stance of night
rolling spumes away into onshore
to heap of sands yet not unknown
history yet records reels of fire.

where are those tiding whelms from hide
speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing
whispering dew of roses basking in glow
moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity

mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow
night when chilled being chiseled of snow
do we ever know the eternity by reality?
rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidi Writes 07 June 2009

This is life after all, full of joy and sorrows May be with a little knowledge of eternal bliss We may escape the side effects of sorrow. A good write on the flings of sorrow Makes me think the ways to escape. Thank you dear poet.

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Lady Grace 08 June 2009

'mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void ' sorrow is only from our hearts..it handed down into our sensitive feelings..this poem expressess on how we should handle loneliness without being so affected..as it is said, it is a fling..grace

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Maria Barbara Korynt 08 June 2009

Beautiful poem. Good imagination is worth the poems. Frenzies of sadness - you say. Yes, sadness has different shades, similarly to joy. To this topic it is possible still a lot to say and to write. Your approach to the topic very much suits me. You know what you are writing about, you are doing it with the belief and beautiful. I am reading with pleasure. - 'rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void ' - 'mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow' - perhaps, but must not I am reading your poem with pleasure. (10v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Indira Renganathan 09 June 2009

Good and evil, day and night, love and hate is all the reality of eternal nature....a heart surrendering His feet balances well with the opponent....I like the last two lines...nice

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 09 June 2009

A beautiful write throughout, 'rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void' excellent

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Duh Huh 17 June 2009

Impressive train of poetic thought. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 June 2009

very strong..full of emotions..sentiments... the depth is amazing and the thoughts are excellent.. expressing one's emotions into this strong, appealing piece.. hitting to the core... the flings of sorrow..the flings of uncertainties.. flows with depth... 10++++

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Meghan Pearson 14 June 2009

The depth at what you write is insane.. that was done amazingly :)

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Antonio Liao 12 June 2009

urges my nerve to listen and talk....the inner revolution experienced with in the my whole life memories.....a mystical poem..holding every lines to breathe beyond natural force.....each has to feel every lines....so deep....such a wonderful poem...God less

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L.P. Alexanders 10 June 2009

very moving poem, i like it so much keep up the good work and i invite u to take a look of my humble poems if time permits

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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