Flash Drive (C) 12-4-08 Poem by Zahir Kijani

Flash Drive (C) 12-4-08

Rating: 5.0


My life was about to plunge or about to take a deadly dive
Me livin was over only until you began to arrive
I formally felt there was no reason for me to be alive
But now I strive to stay afloat now that I have my Flash Drive

I almost pummeled through the sand
I didn’t understand, how crazily, it was by my own demand
I almost lost my life and probably from my own idle hand
But you grabbed me out of the pit when you barely could stand

I almost perished in my thoughts shattered by the black pain
I was almost drenched and drowned by the solid acid black rain
I couldn’t think but it was my thoughts that I wished to obtain
And because of you I could save my thoughts and start thinking again

I was incased by my sorrow as Darkness continued to fall
Sometimes I used to wish that I wasn’t even livin at all
My heart would constantly race my brain, but his engine would stall
But now my sorrow has gone away since he gave Progressive, a call

My life was about to plunge or about to take a deadly dive
Me livin was over only until you began to arrive
I formally felt there was no reason for the sun to rise
But now I strive to stay afloat now that I have my flash drive.

Copyright 12/4/08 ©® Corey Threet
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Sarwar Chowdhury 04 December 2008

Fine flow and rhyme/rhythm well written 10+

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Zahir Kijani

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Buffalo, New york
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