Fixing My Heart Poem by abi Whitaker

Fixing My Heart



i was just wondering
if you could hear my heartbreak i my voice
if you could see it in my eyes
feel it in my soul
but finaly i think it's healing
i'm trying so hard
so badly
to sew up my heart
but the pieces are everywhere
in smithereens
and i try not to look at you
but every time i do
it breaks a little more
though i look like i don't care
but of course i do
yes i clearly do
and it's all because of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ekaterina M. Polischuk 04 March 2012

great poem about love, very emotional with a good rhythm of words and, of course, meaning

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 02 March 2012

if love and care are beyond repair...just let go rather than abject yourself to miseries. love is not always a bed of roses...but if there is still a little love left just try hanging on...a very good poem...well written...

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