Five Liners No.7. Black Hole Poem by Valsa George

Five Liners No.7. Black Hole

Rating: 5.0


In the unlit space of every human heart
Is an ominous black hole
Growing bigger by the dust and dirt of the present
Lain with the sediments of the burnt past
Drawing to its gravitational field the future

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 February 2014

Present, past and future very well narrated as per actions..............Valsa..........nicely presented in five liners............

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 February 2014

a very fine glimpse of the three phases, well done Valsa.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 February 2014

It generally not possible to avoid the black hole. Nice five liner.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 February 2014

Very true said in few lines.... The Black Hole is getting bigger day by day, as it eat us in ominous way We feed it with dust and dirt and burns of the past. Now the gravitational pull is drawing us into the Black Hole..... Lovely poem with Great message. Loved it from your pen.

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Muhammad Ali 03 February 2014

Blackhole is one of my favourite topic to ponder on. This is a nice poem. Relating heart with blackhole. I wish a heart be a blackhole in love. And there are examples... Just as a mother, when she even died, througout in our life, something from us keep on emitting and traveling towards her ash or grave. Just as our beloved heroes may be religious, everyone had become a great blackhole and forcing their gravity from ages. Today, i wish a heart be a blackhole. And we can say 'global heart'.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 December 2018

In the unlit space of every human heart Is an ominous black hole Growing bigger by the dust and dirt of the present......so true dear madam, you have rightly said. A beautiful five liners poem has been astutely presented here.10

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Akhtar Jawad 11 June 2014

Although a black hole eats everything it gets closer. But the emotional laws are not like the physical laws. It's your lovely heart having a black hole that eats only dust and dirt because your conscience is alive. It also means your nice heart doesn't allow your clean thoughts and neat acts to come closer to the black hole. That is also an evidence that you have a beautiful heart, creating this lovely poem and many others.

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Soulful Heart 08 February 2014

future, past and present all bound in a magnetic field of your words..

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Amitava Sur 07 February 2014

Very well said and very true, only how many of us do realize this. It's a revelation towards excellence.

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Joseph Anderson 04 February 2014

I thank you for a profound free verse statement. We all must cope with the missing link. With great brevity you said so much-a telling write-10

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