Valsa George


Five Liners.No.6. Hey, Forest Nymphs! - Poem by Valsa George

I watch the feathered beauties of ravishing plumes
Flying from tree to tree making shrill calls
How I wish I could catch these birds
The lovely deities of the woody groves
To cage their loveliness and melody to own for myself


Comments about Five Liners.No.6. Hey, Forest Nymphs! by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 8,564 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/13/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    Caged or not, you have successfully captured the ' lovely deities of the woody groves', 'the feathered beauties of ravishing plumes' in your poem, that will remain a forever beauty.
    What you wanted to own for yourself, their 'loveliness and melody', is now there for your readers to own. Great poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,038 Points Diane Hine (2/13/2014 5:36:00 AM)

    If we were granted that wish, how would we remember the experience? - fascinating. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (2/3/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    A wish or a desire or a dream that contains pure life is the real beauty of this short poem. Nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,374 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/30/2014 10:28:00 AM)

    Very divinely and soul-stirring...........Valsa......I am mesmerised............... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,584 Points Anthony Di''anno (1/26/2014 3:28:00 AM)

    Ooh Valsa, surely you would be unable to sit in peace knowing you keep beauty in a cage? Surely these nymphs should roam as free as your beautiful poetry? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (1/26/2014 3:15:00 AM)

    , , , , you have already captured the lovely deities in your heart, , , wonderful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,605 Points Md Asadullah (1/26/2014 2:17:00 AM)

    You couldn't capture birds, but you have certainly captured the beautiful scene in your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (1/25/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    ......to capture beauty is everyone's desire...a wonderful write.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,054 Points Savita Tyagi (1/25/2014 4:31:00 PM)

    Lovely five liners. Those birds truly creat a longing for possession but their songs are always free for us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,971 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/25/2014 12:06:00 PM)

    To cage their loveliness and melody to own for myself
    Nice thought. Do not cage the birds cage their loveliness and melody. Beautifully expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,908 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/25/2014 10:54:00 AM)

    Wow..Simply wonderful to read...I loved each lines. So I am not sure which one to praise first. Beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,249 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/25/2014 12:29:00 AM)

    The lovely deities of the woody groves...great! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (1/24/2014 11:13:00 AM)

    May these winged friends with ravishing beauty
    Ever remain in your thoughts pure
    And never long for their caged presence in real! A superb flutter of thoughts... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 930 Points Shahzia Batool (1/24/2014 10:57:00 AM)

    A question-raiser five-liner! but didn't Keats console the Dryad of the woods in his assurance to her...No hungry generations/ tread thee down! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 25, 2014


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