Five Liners No.2 (Molestation) Poem by Valsa George

Five Liners No.2 (Molestation)

Rating: 5.0


Rain clouds stain the Sky with dark lies
The vagrant Wind trumpets them to the world aloud
The Lightning ruptures her with needle like claws
The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet
And the molested Sky sheds tears, inconsolable!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A celestial wedding is to be there ahead perhaps. Let us hope the molestation is just forgiven and forgotten. Powerful lines, Madam Valsa..

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Neela Nath Das 10 March 2013

A wonderful poem again. Brevity of expression, but fully meaningful.Thanks.

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Vivek Tiwari 10 March 2013

It's a great symbolic poem. The elements of Nature symbolize the human being.

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Lyn Paul 11 March 2013

Feel so much sadness in these words. Interesting write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 March 2013

A wonderful comparison of the sky to a girl where lighting ruptures her and thunder stamps her when she sheds tears of rain! GREAT IMAGERY!

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Simone Inez Harriman 08 November 2015

Stunning poem Valsa. Great images. I really love..... The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 February 2015

A beautiful imagination...................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 October 2014

Great imagery with fantastic lines....Valsa......so beautifully crafted.......10/10

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Bri Edwards 20 March 2014

Poor Sky! i especially enjoyed the line: The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet. remember me telling you about coincidences in my life the other day? well, TODAY i read a short story to my wife (from 1921 i believe) entitled Only Child, in which thunder and lightning was prominently mentioned. [ i haven't heard/seen thunder/lighting in a VERY LONG time.] i call that (this poem tied to the short story on; the SAME DAY) another spooky coincidence. would anybody agree? thanks for sharing. bri ;)

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Vipins Puthooran 24 March 2013

An excellent comparison! ! ! ! ! top markss

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