Rain clouds stain the Sky with dark lies
The vagrant Wind trumpets them to the world aloud
The Lightning ruptures her with needle like claws
The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet
And the molested Sky sheds tears, inconsolable!
A wonderful poem again. Brevity of expression, but fully meaningful.Thanks.
It's a great symbolic poem. The elements of Nature symbolize the human being.
A wonderful comparison of the sky to a girl where lighting ruptures her and thunder stamps her when she sheds tears of rain! GREAT IMAGERY!
Stunning poem Valsa. Great images. I really love..... The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet.
Great imagery with fantastic lines....Valsa......so beautifully crafted.......10/10
Poor Sky! i especially enjoyed the line: The Thunder stamps her with its thudding feet. remember me telling you about coincidences in my life the other day? well, TODAY i read a short story to my wife (from 1921 i believe) entitled Only Child, in which thunder and lightning was prominently mentioned. [ i haven't heard/seen thunder/lighting in a VERY LONG time.] i call that (this poem tied to the short story on; the SAME DAY) another spooky coincidence. would anybody agree? thanks for sharing. bri ;)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A celestial wedding is to be there ahead perhaps. Let us hope the molestation is just forgiven and forgotten. Powerful lines, Madam Valsa..