Five Liners.1. Mystery Poem by Amitava Sur

Five Liners.1. Mystery



Five liners.1. Mystery
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What a mystery in this world, we all do see!
If somewhere it is dawn
Then somewhere it is dusk! ! .


What a mystery with the people, we all do see!
Most of the people, we live behind a musk ! ! !
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Amitava (2.8.2014) 6-00 pm


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Saturday, August 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mystery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 07 August 2014

Nice five liner. World is a mystery. And human beings are more mysterious than any body. Both your five liners are great.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2014

Thoughtful Mystery, you have presented it very well. Not letting the world knowing, how one live. Very true said, we can never guess how others live...It's all how they present themselves so beautifully, make us feel their life is so beautiful. In fact every thing remains hidden...Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 August 2014

The mystery of people is even deeper. Some say it is right and some say otherwise. Beautiful five liner. Thank you.

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2014

Very good, Amitava, the world does have many mysteries, and we humans more even, hiding, not wanting ourselves to be known for who we are. So many things need to be explored, met and brought out into the open.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 August 2014

Nice four lines. The mystery will remain a mystery. These questions have no answers.

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