Five Liner. Evening Sky Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. Evening Sky

Rating: 5.0


In the evening sky wade the truant clouds
With the sweep of wind, I see them
Forming into configurations of varied shape and size!
Giants, mountains and raw bundles of fluffy wool
To be woven into yet a hundred patterns

Sunday, February 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2015

Very great description of how clouds appear to us here on earth. Love clouds also. Thank you, Valsa - very nice descriptive poem. RoseAnn

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Sandra Feldman 22 February 2015

Ravishing description of clouds and shapes. Poetically accurate. Being a cloud gazer myself, could not have enjoyed this quintet more. Fine work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2015

Very nicely composed about clouds and its various appearance in five lines. Deep feeling; fantastic expression. Many thanks dear madam, ..

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Amitava Sur 22 February 2015

lovely expression of clouds about their formations in so many ways in the distant sky what we all love to see.... very nice

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Kavya . 22 February 2015

good one..hw true..yes clouds take various shapes and forms for us to admire them more and think deep

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 21 April 2015

A poem as beautiful as the evening sky.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 February 2015

Clouds form various beautiful patterns, a lovely description of evening sky.......

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 24 February 2015

Short and sweet - yet a memorable event. Well, all things sweet have to be short!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 February 2015

We all have often wondered at the concinnity of the cloud formation. THIS FIVE LINER IS EXCELLANT.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 February 2015

Clouds weave patterns on mountain tops. Beautiful scene described in the five line.

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