Five Liner. Drab Existence Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. Drab Existence

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Hour after hour slips
Dissolving in the current of time
Days unwind with nothing momentous
In this vapid existence
Can I ever flaunt a trophy?

Friday, December 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 19 December 2014

To have people read what you write and admire you for it seems to me the greatest trophy. You've got both, poetic lady.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 19 December 2014

In fact the poetess have gained much trophies from the readers through the valuable and appreciating comments I think. This is a beautiful poem.

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Rajesh Thankappan 19 December 2014

Sometimes life get bogged down in the current of time. Yes poetess, you can of course flaunt your interesting poems!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 December 2014

As a blessed and gifted poetess there will never be dearth of trophies for you......Valsa.....your work is your great award.......amazing piece

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 December 2014

As a blessed and gifted poetess there will never be dearth of trophies for you......Valsa.....your work is your great award.......amazing piece

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 April 2019

In this vapid existence Can I ever flaunt a trophy? .......very brilliant question that can bring a sound answer. Beautiful poem nicely delineated.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 January 2015

Drab Existence is a lovely Five-liner bringing to the fore one experiences at times of remorse.

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Amitava Sur 30 December 2014

A lovely poem read. Dissolving in the current of time Removing any dirt if stuck... Flaunt your Trophy with glitter and shine.

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Savita Tyagi 30 December 2014

Learned two words! That's my trophy! Your trophy as your poems displayed on PH all over! Loved it.

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Hazel Durham 22 December 2014

You can flaunt your trophy of writing such beautiful poems with panache!

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