Five Liner. An Exhortation Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. An Exhortation

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Rise, Oh friends, rise into action!
No time to be wasted in procrastination
Nor for the ripe moment, in anticipation
As the tiny seconds that go 'tick-tock'
Are irrecoverably dispelled from life’s clock

Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roop Rekha Bhaskar 08 September 2015

Agree one 100% Time and time does not wait for anyone. Procrastination begins early - sometimes in childhood. and then continues as a habit. wise five lines and very educational. I feel that such Liners should be written at the end of English text books.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 September 2015

Yes every proceeding moment is death of the preceding moment. A nice poem.........................10

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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2015

Motivational....................................Inspirational........................Outstanding poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 September 2015

No time to lose. Just put things into action. Great advice. Thank you.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 09 September 2015

A 'timely' exhortation that has eternal value.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 March 2020

Rise Awake into action! yeah right you are everyone is the true outcome of own deeds; good deeds beget beautiful life and misdeeds beget melancholic present!

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Budhashaya Behera 19 February 2020

This poem is greatly motivational poem. Getting God's grace of course all friends will rise into power. This poem is interesting and lovely. I highly appreciate your effort! ..10++

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Wonderful words of wisdom! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2017

This poem has contained a nice exhortation through the fine inking of a poetess. Valuable dictadictums. I fully appreciate this poem. Full vote.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 May 2017

In anticipation! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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