Five Fingers Poem by Brian Dorn

Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.

Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!

Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn.

absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much. I love this poem..well done Bryan Arti

Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim

Plain and simple and short. A 'love' poem. bri : )

Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love

it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings

It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.

Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael