Fish In The Sea Poem by Erin Daly

Fish In The Sea

Rating: 4.5


You said to me;
'there are more fish in the sea'.
As if my lungs breath salt water.

Do you believe some fish might
fill the empty cage
where HE broke into my heart?

Beneath the waves
the fish are waiting..
waiting for me?

Sunday, September 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 October 2014

Indeed there are more fish in the ocean. Take your time, and you'll get exactly what you wish for. Since he had decided to walk away, have courage, you may probably get much better than him. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Lyn Paul 29 September 2014

May you take your time swimming in the high seas to find your right catch. Thanks and welcome Erin

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