First Word I Took Was You Poem by navami patil

First Word I Took Was You

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First word i took was you

I was a just a micron within you
With u until the pain separated us

U took me in your arms,
Hugged me and said safe.

My lips widen to your wink
Only cause our eye know the secret.

U knew when the tear dropped just
Your touch made all the change.

Sounds that i first made
Was one word made your world change

Steps that i first moved
That kept you captured and made u clap.

Jumps and hops and rounds that i made
No matter what you kept me going on and on.

fear was the time i had to leave your finger first..you just prayed and prayed and never ended.

U kept heartbeats and eye in rhythm
Until u saw me running towards u and
One again

U knew every word i would mean..
And be there before the sound came.

U know my heart better then me
Word trust is what u define.

Though am at other part of world
Prayers of heart connect mine.

What a creation god made..
Sent himself available as 😘 and still..

Now all my heart wish is to
Be with you and only you cause
you and only you love me truly

I know words wounded your heart
But u never stopped loving..
cause i still see in your eye.

Unconditional love is what you give
No one can replace you


By
Navami.v.patil

First Word I Took Was You
Friday, September 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother and child
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is a true feeling i felt when i was away from mom for a year and when i met her again i was so overwhelmed and understood i can never repay back what she has given me and no other person in life can do it for us
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 18 September 2015

maybe you'd check your write for some typos/grammar.. but there's a great feeling expressed in your verse, Navami.. and I'm sure your mom is proud of you Welcome at PH! Blessings

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Navami Patil 19 September 2015

TY SIR FOR YOUR BLESSINGS AND I AM STILL TAKING MY BABY STEPS IN POETRY @fabrizio frosini

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