First Poem Poem by LeiLa LighT

First Poem

Rating: 5.0


My first poem in all my life
i wonder what people would say
what do u think?
written on April the fool
i hope u comment on it
saying it is COOL

LOL

aPRIL 1,2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esmaeil Esbati 02 June 2006

great it is, keep going girl, it would be cool, I am cool, u r cool, ur poem is cool.

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Konjit Berhane 25 April 2006

hey Great poem girl...couldn't be any better not only is it cOOL BUT IT IS sUPER CooL KEEP IT UP ***kOnI***

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