First Place Where I Meet My Beloved Poem by Indrajeet Mishra

First Place Where I Meet My Beloved

Rating: 4.8


Of the heart-touching beauty
I detect a sound sound
Which let all hatred to wither,
And brim in whole sorrounding so profound.
Shall it started elaborating,
I was being mesmerized,
And it felt all angels of heaven,
Gather and dance and being serenaded.
So far, Till my heart and eyes,
Could succeeded in gobbling that adoration,
I was standing quite like statue,
And when I come in sensation,
I found that it was that rendezvous,
Where I first met my Sweet-heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 05 November 2012

wonderful description........great imagination and imagery............great and intense feelings..................lovely and beautiful write :)

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Poetheart Morgan 07 November 2012

Beautiful and romantic bring me to the past! ! ! ! Great

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 07 November 2012

great write.....so passionate expressions..........keep writing....

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Kishor Sharma 08 November 2012

Beautiful poem. keep the fire burning.

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Indira Babbellapati 08 November 2012

great teenage imagination...

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 October 2014

a nice poem showing the beauty of romance........good use of words in the last four lines..........KEEP WRITING.

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Rose Flores 29 November 2012

a statue... is a clear metaphor of your poem. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day!

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Onyeme John 10 November 2012

That's a sweet memory on ink. Keep it up.

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Simon Odhiambo 10 November 2012

Very good and great thoughts...

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John Hayes 09 November 2012

True love and pure also, very nice!

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