First Feel Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

First Feel

Rating: 4.8


</>In My Little Nest
I Make Noise
Always I Realise
My Mom Also

Now It Changes
My Voice
My Figure
Noticed Mom

The Next Tree Top
I saw You and
Your Song
Can`t Understand

Is it called Love
Felt Something
In the Winter Too Hot
I Felt Something?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chelsea Brink 10 January 2009

very nice imagery, it moved me through the treetops.

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 January 2009

sweet...moving piece... growing into a person and growing in love. we all have undergone changes. experienced or will experience the first feel on the thing called_love... beautiful share.......10++++

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Rekha Mandagere 30 March 2011

Lovely poem.The imagery used is of fine nature, which really makes one to feel warmth.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 January 2010

In winter too hot you felt…is it warmth of LOVE [not love]? 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sandra Fowler 24 October 2009

This one definately has its charm. Romance begins in the tree tops.10+. Always your friend, sandra

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Mohammed Albalushi 22 January 2009

lovely poem dear, well write

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Fiona Davidson 19 January 2009

Lovely images making this a beautiful poem...thank you...Fi

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