First Drop Of Rain Poem by ramesh rai

First Drop Of Rain

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First drop of rain did not know
how long she had to travel
how many problem will come on way
every gale will try to embrace her
will blow her, holding tightly in arms
will try to kiss her; albeit
she left to meet the ocean
to engross herself into his bosom
she is determined to meet the ocean
thus she left her castle of sky.

Saturday, November 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 December 2014

Drop of rain left the castle of sky... A beautiful keen observation with great expression.

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Hazel Durham 01 December 2014

With great imagination you have followed the first drop of rain on her journey of discovery to meet the ocean and on the way she is embraced by gales but her dream is to meet the ocean! I love this brilliant write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 November 2014

First drop of rain- with lots of happiness the brave martyr the drop thank you

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