First Crack - 10 Words Poem by Elena Sandu

First Crack - 10 Words

Rating: 5.0


Heard
that crystal
sound?
First crack
of a pure
heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 25 May 2012

Aye! We have all heard that crack. Great poem in condensed form.

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Gordon Tseng 21 February 2012

Heard that sync sound? First echo of another pure heart.

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Rekha Mandagere 17 February 2012

Who broke the gentle heart should read it 10 times to know the gravity of crime that has been done to a loving heart. Beautiful!

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Wabi Sabi 14 February 2012

the younger, the more innocent, the more fragile, the more transparent. good poem. thanks for share!

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Hans Vr 10 February 2012

Beautiful poem in just 10 wonderfully combined words. Hope the crack heals quickly

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