Fireflies Poem by Ernestine Northover

Fireflies

Rating: 5.0


A lake softly shimmering, in the evening's sunset glow,
Fireflies are dancing above it, moving swiftly to and fro,
Like a shower of confetti, they gyrate in a swirling mass,
Hovering over the surface, lightly humming as they pass.

Sparkles of light flickering, whilst they quickly skim, advancing
Across the water, each one striving to fulfil the art of prancing,
As if, in one mad moment, held fast in a rhythmic trance,
They become, totally mesmerized, by the magic of the dance.

With all these fireflies parading, they are, such a wondrous sight,
Their grand display, becomes a vision of absolute delight,
Thousands of them have gathered, to join this vast array,
Each one glittering with luminosity, at the ending of the day.

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Egal Bohen 02 November 2005

A lot of atsmosphere conveyed through this Ernestine - where does this wonder occur - I'd like to go there! Egal...

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***** ********* 02 November 2005

Lovely imagery Ermestine. I've seen them and it's magical. 10 from me. Remembering with fondness Tai.

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Alice Vedral Rivera 02 November 2005

Brings me back to my childhood. I really enjoyed the visual it gave me. avr

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Manpreet Singh 01 May 2019

Its like a painting in word of an evening with fireflies prancing around.

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Andrew Blakemore 07 April 2008

Brilliant descriptions and imagery. Finely written piece. Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 01 April 2006

And we are also circled by words that hover and then place themselves beautifully within our hearts where they are home.Lovely words again Ernestine.love Duncan

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Emma Johnson 10 March 2006

Your descriptive power is amazing. I could use your own words: magic of the dance, art of prancing, luminosity, and rhythmic trance, to describe the words of your intoxicating poem.

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Lucy Burrow 07 November 2005

Oh Ernestine! how I would love to see this, you made it seem soooooo magical! Regards, Lucy

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