Fire Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Fire

Rating: 4.4


It burns in the stars
To make the universe possible
It burns in the stars
To have the heavens going
It burns the stars
to make the worlds end
whenever the end's inevitable

From the beginning-less time
Fire has been the main sustenance
of life and all its paraphernalia
Fire is your breath
And fire is your thirst
Polemically all the rivers
are nothing but fire
Fire flows to quench the fire of all!

The ancient mother earth
Still cherishes the fire
In the hearth of her heart
To keep her progenies warm
And her oceans so fluid

It is also the same fire
The fire in your belly
Your guts, your glory…..

P.S.
And so is your beauty
A fire par excellence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rory Hudson 01 June 2009

A nice take on fire - dramatic imagery.

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Rashid Iskandar 01 June 2009

what a great poem..... i gave you 10.. you can read mine too..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

Amazing composition on fire 10

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 May 2009

'It burns in the stars To make the universe possible It burns in the stars To have the heavens going It burns the stars to make the worlds end whenever the end's inevitable' these words speak a lot...true indeed..burning fire helps us to live// keeps us worm// fire is everything..gives light...help to burn our food..simply something we cant be without../fire can be destructive too at times..that s why they say dont play with fire...lbut if you play with fire tenderly..it can be your greatest mate u r poem arouses the reader's mind's eye//thanks for the invite// i ll read the rest 10++

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Joseph Poewhit 20 May 2009

There is an enchanting mystic about fire

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 16 July 2009

Sounds like fire is the answer to everything.

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The Dreamer 26 June 2009

It burns in the stars To make the universe possible It burns in the stars To have the heavens going It burns the stars really great well done

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Rahul Dwivedi 06 June 2009

completely abstract form.

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Surya . 04 June 2009

beautifull thoughts.beautifull write.i love this para 'The ancient mother earth Still cherishes the fire In the hearth of her heart To keep her progenies warm And her oceans so fluid' posted 10 love surya

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Louis Rams 04 June 2009

an excellent write, and the way that you express what you see in your mind, is far beyond the time. GR8T WRITE A TEN

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